Cell Phones in Schools Opinion Letter

Question 1

Essay
Write a letter to Mr. Salty about whether cell phones should be allowed in schools. Remember to hook your reader, explain the controversy, and state your claim and reasons in the introduction paragraph. The letter should be at least 4 paragraphs. Use evidence from the texts to support your thinking.
Cell Phones Raise Security Concerns at Schools
Many people think that students having cell phones in school is
a great idea. Many parents feel that they don’t have to worry as
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much about their children if they have a cell phone. They feel
if they need to reach their child or their child needs to reach them, the cell
phone can help them get in touch with each other right away. However, cell
phones in school can lead to problems.
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One problem is theft. Cell phones can be stolen. In January 2012, police
arrested 13 high school students in Bucks County, Pennsylvania. People
accused them of stealing more than $4,000 worth of cell phones and tablets
from their classmates. An undercover investigation by police found that at
least 24 devices had been stolen over two months at the school, according
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to nbcphiladelphia.com. Theft is a real concern when cell phones are
allowed in schools.
Another problem is cell phone use during emergencies. Many people
want students to have cell phones in emergencies. But this might not be
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safe. The National School Safety and Security Services (NSSSS) says that
people in charge should have cell phones during emergencies. But it may
cause harm if students use their phones in emergencies. If thousands of
students make calls at the same time during an emergency, that could slow
down the phone system. The NSSSS website says, “The use of cell phones by
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students could . . . decrease, not increase, school safety during a crisis.”
When students use their cell phones during emergencies, another
problem can be caused. Students’ calls may cause their parents to rush to
the school during an emergency. Emergency workers might not want to
have tons of parents running to the school. All those parents might get in
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the way during an emergency. They might make things less safe.
Many parents want their children to have cell phones. They want to be
able to reach their child at any time. One survey by vouchercloud.net found
that of the 2,290 parents they asked, most of the parents got their kids their
first cell phone when the child was six-years-old. 31% of the parents said
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they got their child a cell phone for “security reasons, so my child could
always contact me.”
Text 1
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Text 1: Cell Phones Raise Security Concerns at Schools ◆ page 2
But there are safety problems that are caused by cell phones in schools.
Schools must think about these concerns. They must think carefully about
security. Only then should they decide what to do about cell phones.
C. J. Perkins
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School safety officer in Walmouth County
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Text 2: New York City Mayor Changes Cell Phone Policy in Schools ◆ page 1
Text 2
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New York City Mayor Changes Cell Phone
Policy in Schools
Mayor reverses a ban on cell phones that has existed since 1988
In January 2015, students in New York City received some happy news.
Mayor DeBlasio changed the policy about cell phones in schools. Now,
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students could bring their phones to school. Now, school principals
could decide the rules for using cell phones in their schools.
Some of the options that principals can consider are:
•	 ask students to store their phones in backpacks or another place during
the day
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•	 say that cell phones can be used during lunch time or in special areas of
the school
•	 allow cell phones to be used in classrooms for instructional purposes
“Parents should be able to call or text their kids,” the Mayor said when he
announced his reform. “Lifting the ban respects families.”
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Prior to this change, some had claimed that the “no cell phones in
school” policy was not enforced fairly. Some schools enforced the ban
strictly. Some schools with metal detectors could easily find out if students
had cell phones. In those schools, which were mostly in low-income areas,
students were having their phones taken away or having to pay each day to
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store their phones in vans parked outside of the schools. But other schools
ignored the ban. As long as teachers did not see the phones, they were okay
with students having them.
Many students are happy to be allowed to bring their phones to school.
But not everyone agrees with this ruling. Many argue that phones are a
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major distraction in class. In an op-ed piece for The New York Post, Naomi
Schaefer Riley argues it is a “terrible idea to allow cell phones in school.”
She claims that students already spend too much time staring at screens.
She says students will now spend their class time looking at their phones.
They should be paying attention in class instead. Teachers could make cell
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Text 2: New York City Mayor Changes Cell Phone Policy in Schools ◆ page 2
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phones part of the lessons for student. But Riley says they will have to check
kids’ phones. They will need to make sure kids are doing educational work
and not texting or visiting social media sites. Riley says, “Where once kids
might have been using their phones to do some texting or even calling each
other, now they can spend hours on social-networking sites, ignoring their
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[math] lessons.”
Cell phones can be a distraction in class in another way. A phone
ringing during a lesson can distract the other students and the teacher.
Students report that when this occurs, the ringing is very distracting. In
addition, some teachers argue that when mobile phones are banned in their
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classrooms, bullying decreases.
But other people say this change is a good thing. Yin Cherd, a parent
from Jamaica, Queens, talked to The Wall Street Journal. She said, “When my
daughter gets off of school I want to text her and she texts me.” Cherd said
she would worry about her children if they didn’t have phones.
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And some teachers are excited to bring cell phones into learning. Many
apps can help students learn. There are apps that let students work on
collaborative projects. There are apps that let teachers poll their students.
Teachers can quiz students using their phones or let the class play games
related to the lesson. There are even apps to support study skills and
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resources for history. Still, not all students have cell phones and that could
be a problem.
Schools will have to think very carefully about how to make good rules
for cell phone use. Schools will need more training on how to identify and
prevent cyber bullying. And all schools will require that no phones can be
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out during tests.
Whatever rules are made about cell phones, though, some students
might still find ways to break them. Lucia Paz, a 14-year-old from Brooklyn,
told The Wall Street Journal, “At lunch I’ll just play music,” she said. “It’s like
a relaxer for me sometimes.”
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What do you think? Should your town allow cell phones in schools?
Article from a local newspaper
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Text 3: Cell Phones Should Be in Schools ◆ page 1
Text 3
Cell Phones Should Be in Schools
Every day when kids go to school and they have to leave their cell
phones behind them at home, that is a huge problem. Everyone has
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cell phones today (well, everyone over the age of 8). And telling kids
that just because they are kids and in school that they can’t bring their cell
phones is not fair. Kids need their cell phones for the same reasons that
adults need their cell phones. They want to keep in touch with their friends
and check the Internet, too.
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Sometimes after school we have play dates. That means we might need
to use our phones and check with our parents that it’s okay. If we don’t
have our phones in school, what are we supposed to do? They don’t let
you use the office to call home just for any reason. You have to have an
emergency and they don’t think a playmate is an emergency. But what if
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you forgot you had a playmate and you really needed to call home? You
need your cell phone.
Also, if we could have our cell phones in school, we’d probably do a
lot better in school. Like you could use your phone to look up how to spell
words and to look up information like if you didn’t know the capital of a
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country.
In addition, sometimes parents have to text or call their kids. For
example, I had a dentist appointment two weeks ago and my mom forgot
to tell me. She didn’t have any way to let me know about it until the end of
the day so I didn’t know I had to go until school was over. If I could have
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had my cell phone in school, then she could have texted me so I would
have been prepared.
This is why it is very important for schools to change the rules and let
students bring their cell phones to school. Right now, in my school, if you
bring your cell phone to school and your teacher sees it he or she has to
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take it away from you and your parent has to go to school to get it back.
This is a very unfair policy which should be changed. Students should be
able to have their cell phones in school.
A blog post entry, from Jeremy, age 11

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